User blog comment:Morrigan101/making character/@comment-7345250-20160227235432

Alright, I have a few questions I would encourage you to consider.


 * If she was a prisoner of war, what war was she captured in?

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Wait, is that really all I've got?!

[aggressively checking notes]

Hmmm... The latest edit actually fixed most of my concerns, namely the wacky resemblance to Parlys the Pale, who was the hybrid prince of an extinct super-changeling swarm. You're actually on the right track.